All Comments on 'James's Descent Ch. 10 - Epilogue'

WOW... just fucking WOW!!! What a story I can't wait for the rest of the sequel very impressive in SO many ways. The level of detail is worthy of being a three patr film! Keep up the good work 5 🌟 all the way.👌👏🤘👍🍻

Oh, I do appreciate such a heartfelt comment. RotS is on its way when I can decide how to structure the storytelling. I know this epilogue might be underwhelming but how can one summarize dozens of other stories without fully telling them?

Odds are that the story of the empire will be longer, but it has to be. Expect it in January and might finish around the end of February. And I do hope for more such comments, good or bad. How can one improve without feedback? Question everything.

I look forward to your next work, This one was rather enjoyable for what it is. Very good world building and James really got what he wanted in the end.

Frankly it needs an Epilogue #2

It is madness to the n-th. But more often than not it makes sense.

I'm reading with a big smile on my face.