All Comments on 'Jamie Ch. 03-04'

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Chiara23Chiara23about 2 years ago

The title said chapters 3 and 4 but there's barely a chapter 3? This was more of an interlude honey. Well written though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story was professionaly written and held my attention.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just started chapter 3/4 but wondered how someone that obviously knows Queensland could go to the beach to see the sunset! It alludes to the sun going down over the sea, which doesn’t happen on the east coast. You need to go to Western Australia to see that.

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