All Comments on 'Jamie's Perfect Life Ch. 01'

Intriguing. Definitely want to see where this goes.

Good story line and development is reasonably smooth. Perhaps writing in first person would make it flow, pun not implied, more easily.

This one has bad idea written all over it and we all know that the best stories have the character falling for a bad idea. It falls under the ole “if it’s sounds too good to be true, it probably is” which should be added as the 11th commandment.