All Comments on 'Jane in New York Pt. 08-09'

Two chapters in one? What a treat!

Both chapters were crazy! Jane and Veronica finally meeting was so intense! And even though things didn't turn out the way I wanted, the final scene where Jane pleasured herself to Veronica was so hot!!!

Once again, my italics didn't translate over once this was published. If anyone could help me with this issue I would really appreciate it.

Thank you and I hope you all still enjoy the story, despite any confusions.

Nevermind, I found a solution. I will edit this chapter and make sure this doesn't happen with future chapters. Thanks for your patience.

My god 2 chapters and both so erotic and pleasant to read. Thank you and I hope you continue the story. Can’t leave us not knowing how Christine and Vicky ended up.

Double Pleasure & Fun!

This was a nice 2 for 1 chapter package loaded with explosive sex. We all had hopped for a return of Jane and Veronica on a bed or massage, however did not happen. What did happen was both Jane and Veronica tip-toeing through the tulips, with both afraid of making a move and getting their parade rained on.

Vicky exploded back into the action, now where is that Christine girl🎉?

Definitely 5*-STAR Double Bubble Chapters!

Wonderful piece; so many rich, captivating, fun characters, yet I cannot let go of the Veronica - Jane connection, and maybe you can’t as well. I am probably over analyzing/missing so much but both Veronica and Jane are so much alike - they genuinely help others with relationships, but when it comes time for two adult women to be honest with one another — to follow their own advice — they falter. And maybe that falter is the end, but that would surprise me as they both all but recognize. Of course that may be your intention as the author of this tale, but I hope not. OK — pretty obvious I cannot see the forest through … . Still enjoy your writing so much.