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AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Wow! I I really like how the author is patiently letting the reader get to know the main characters, which is important as the story develops in subsequent chapters.

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Hannah is revealing Jane’s sexuality and Jane obviously loves it.

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Looking forward to Jane’s transformation; perhaps a breast enhancement to an E or F cup, and lip fillers as well. She will need to learn how to be arm candy and how to pleasure a man - or woman - a lot of changes and a lot to learn in the next chapters. You have created a completely believable character and I want to read more.

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