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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Needing a good edit

Decent concept. You need to work on your writing. Basic grammar & style. You need a good editor.

zena99zena99almost 5 years ago
I loved the theme

Mr. Blank has great potential. Thank you VERY much for this.

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I am from a small town in California. I grew up on the poor side of the middle class. As a pale-skinned redhead, I avoid the sun as much as possible. I'm an easy-going guy most of the time. I don't drink or smoke never been into drugs. I only wish I was as forward with women a...