by jasminetanme
This story is full of well written scenes of embarrassing moments. One of the best moments was when Jasmine realized that Nicolette her former rival had been promoted to senior partner while she was now working as a toilet cleaner.
Including her former interns helped intensify the level of embarrassment in the office lobby.
Please give Jasmine's bare butt more attention. Her butthole seems to be left out of the picture; especially when she's down cleaning on all fours.
Very good continuation of the story so far.
I've looked forward to this since Chapter 4.
Thanks for posting another great addition to the series. Your writing has a unique style that combines great detail and creative dialogue which helps to immerse the reader in the story.
The writing does a good job of capturing Jasmine's feelings of embarrassment throughout the story.
Hoping that Jasmine's humiliation at Stuls Corporation is just getting started.
Good to see You back to form. Thought ch 11 was short and a bit weak after a strong ch 10. Maybe it can be polished a bit, later. But this timely, long and strong ch12 was definitely an upside surprise. Hope You don't loose Your fun and dedication and continue to publish here.
Thank You and all the best
As Nicolette rises, her former rival continues to fall. I like the role reversal as former subordinates take charge and give a little pay back.
These stories always keep me coming back for more.
Keep it going.
Public nudity, sexual harassment, revenge porn... how one packs so much illegal activity into one chapter is amazing.
I don't know how this story can possibly get worse.
I found this story to be very entertaining; isn't that the goal of a good story. The writing was well thought out and creatively worded.
Sometimes fact is stranger than fiction. I once attended an office party that celebrated a coworker by hiring a gorgeous young blonde stripper.
She spent over two hours completely naked. She wasn't arrested, charged as a sex offender or filed sexual harrassment charges. Sometimes I wonder if some people grew up under a rock.
Looking forward to reading another enjoyable story in the series.
I love reading this story.
Please think also of the use of her but,
and let her do more humbling things for
nicolette.
I look forward to read more of this story
Thanks for als the good work.
How could anyone under such stress remember all those commands? Hot, yes, but also beyond possible.