All Comments on 'Jasmine's in Trouble Ch. 19'

Wow, what a nice Christmas present!!

I especially loved the ending of this chapter (nice symmetry with the original story beginning).

OpenlyJas and Jasminetanme were 2 of my favourite authors. I was delighted to find out someone was continuing the story, but your choice of turning Jasmine’s husband into one of her thoughtless tormentors and Nicolette into basically another spineless bimbo ruins so many possibilities for what could have been. I will continue reading for sure if this is not actually the end of the line, although it seems like it indeed is since it is difficult to imagine Jasmine actually feeling humiliated when she has nothing to lose + the physical abuse (slapping) is just overboard.

Oh dear anon, there’s always something to lose. There’s always more. Always. :)

As for the slapping, I don’t find it too much, I’ve only wrote a tiny portion of it from my fetish. :)

Like I said in the previous chapter, this book will have 26 chapters. (13 from Jasminetanme, 13 from me(for now.))

Didn't see this twist in the original. Nice work.

Nice plot twist, but what happened to references to the piercings. It's as if they have disappeared. I hope you will bring them back and maybe a tattoo or two.