All Comments on 'Jasmine's Last Stand, Pt. 01'

Good set up, interested to see where you take it!

Excellent start, keep up the good work. Try not to do cliffhangers before you give reader a taste of the action, though.

That is a very solid start. Interesting characters who seem like your typical rich kids sucking offense off their parents bank accounts and not giving a crap about anyone but themselves and where to get the next thrill or laugh at anyone’s expense. I cannot wait to read what is next.