All Comments on 'Jasmine's Puppygirl'

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thebobber326thebobber3268 months ago

Great start. Can't wait to read the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Umm, what about her periods with the hole superglued shut?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too dark to work out

Jasmine doesn't care for her pet ... seems as if life expectancy for puppy girls is set to be rather low ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
great start!

I love what you have done so far and I hope you continue down this humiliating path! Puppies sometimes eat their own poop if they go in the lawn and think they might get caught!! just a thought... :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good start

I thought it was a good start. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I know it's just a story

I don't understand why people have to rag on what someone else writes. I just like reading stories. I liked the plot, i just wish it was longer, and more in detail.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great

Loved it please continue!

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