All Comments on 'Jayne's World Pt. 10'

Great story - love this series, hoping for many more parts!

I love this story - would hate to think it ends here! Hoping for another part or two...

Any more coming?

I love the series. But it shouldn't end like this being so close to a new sexual adventure but not being able to complete it. And I'm sure there could be more, yes?

Another great read, loving the build ups and let downs, before reaching the peak. There has to be some more chapters to see how they progress.

Keep up the great work, Jayne

Intriguing developments, but still a fabulous read

They seem to be pushing or goading each other to understand how far this “adventuring” should go. I’m sure they will both reach their goal and fullfil their fantasies of new experiences.

The thing is that even with the sex only implied this is still delicious social social comedy with James and Ralph like rams buttin' heads over Jayne. Of course, in that context poor James' great deflation may just be karma. And as a geezer, I can relate.