All Comments on 'Jeannie's Secret Desires Ch. 03'

Strong sensitivity and depth - very nice work - recommend that it could be even better if someone (editor or friend) review / proofread for you. Your minds eye sees what it wants to /too / two / 2 doesn't it.

Lastly, I am pleased for the male figure in this recent story, however it poses the marital complexity of fairness and respect. The plus is the addition dimensions possible with a third person. The negative complexity is sorid non-sharing or author minipulated mindless acceptance by either party that disrespect is somehow sensual. Perhaps you sense this as your style indicates, or it may be a new arena. In either case, know that marital fairness and respect is a pivital point of many of your readers acceptance of your baby. If there is disrespect, then as in life , consequence should follow unless the author thinks conveluted, contrived minds will feel that it's erotic / sensual. Please don't fall prey to that non-sensual sickness. Poor authors may need it to sell thier worped product to the sickies, but talented people like yourself should resist it and grow even more, as selfishly we hope you will. Thanks with Regards

I cannot wait until Jim comes home to his "suprise." Thank you for the time and effort you took to write this fine story.

this is a great story.it touches all the bases. hope there will be at least 2 more parts, please don't keep us waiting

Reminds me of an old old book circa. early 60s titled as above. It was a great story and so is this one.

A very good story so far can't waint for the next chapter

Great story so far!!!

I absolutely love where you are going with this ... the passion and the care among all of your characters is gives the reader a beautiful sense of something rare and precious unfolding.

Nothing but lesbians here, without a LW in sight.