All Comments on 'Jedirotica Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 20 years ago

Incredible start

Most impressed with the first chapter. You have allowed yourself the room to breathe new life into the characters of 'Star Wars' and stretched my imagination. Please contiue

karen220044 almost 20 years ago

Incredible

Simply outstanding. I loved the eroticism of the sex scenes without the vulgarity so common in erotic stories. The descriptiveness and your knowledge of the Star Wars universe made this one of the best stories I've read. I can't wait for the second chapter.

Anonymousover 13 years ago

Loved it, but needs an editor.

Several grammar mistakes and rogue words distracted me from an otherwise vivid fantasy. Please edit.

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