All Comments on 'Jelly Bean and Her Bail Bondsman Ch. 03'

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marlam5marlam5about 12 years ago
Another great chapter

This is another great chapter to this story.

I enjoyed it very much and can't wait finding out what will happen next.

Thanks for charring with us.

chattykathy8883chattykathy8883almost 12 years ago
ONE HELL OF A STORY!!!

I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS STORY. FELL IN LOVED WITH THE CHARACTERS. CAN'T GET ENOUGHT OF THIS STORY. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I have enjoyed reading all of the chapters and am waiting for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
All over the place

Point of view more times than I could count. Write from Anita's perspective or Dannys......or separate it with a star so it's easier to follow who is telling the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
loving this story

such a refreshing change from so many others here - and yes, the point of view changes are frequent, but I think it adds to the story, knowing the perspectives of the other characters rather than just one. Write more please :)

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