All Comments on 'Jelly Bean and Her Bail Bondsman Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
loving this story

such a refreshing change from so many others here - and yes, the point of view changes are frequent, but I think it adds to the story, knowing the perspectives of the other characters rather than just one. Write more please :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
All over the place

Point of view more times than I could count. Write from Anita's perspective or Dannys......or separate it with a star so it's easier to follow who is telling the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I have enjoyed reading all of the chapters and am waiting for the next chapter.

chattykathy8883chattykathy8883almost 12 years ago
ONE HELL OF A STORY!!!

I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS STORY. FELL IN LOVED WITH THE CHARACTERS. CAN'T GET ENOUGHT OF THIS STORY. MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!

marlam5marlam5about 12 years ago
Another great chapter

This is another great chapter to this story.

I enjoyed it very much and can't wait finding out what will happen next.

Thanks for charring with us.

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