All Comments on 'Jen Liked My Stories Ch. 1'

Enjoyed the beginning and the psychological deconstruction of the submissive mindset...but the popcorn toy? Very weird twist at the ending. Sort of jarred the mood.

I'm loving this story. Very hot! Especially the toy attached to the butt plug! This is a short comment as I'm eager to find the next chapter!

He just takes the complexities of human emotion and turns them into a thin sheet of cellophane. Very dandy.

HI there well done :)