All Comments on 'Jen: Route 66 Kicks-Santa Monica'

It reads like a brochure (a small pamphlet, or short book of data, sometimes containing trivia, or other interesting--to certain readers--facts, which can be used to make an already dull short story into a dull four-page story...)

... it was great. Some segments of the long journey were more exciting than others but overall I loved it. I disagree with the knucklehead who wrote about pamphlets because they have their place in the world, too. I grew up in Iowa, went to Iowa State which is on rte 30, the Lincoln Highway. In a way I'm sorry that Jen didn't travel that road although it's not celebrated in song. I doubt that Bobby Troup even knew of it. Of course, that would have been an even longer trip -- maybe too long. All-in-all I loved Jen and her kicks on 66.

Wow! The saga ends rather sadly but with some rays of hope – will Jen's daughter (not named?) meet her mother's ghost on route 66? What a wonderful meeting that would be! As for the tale in general, it was well written with just the right degree of historical accuracy and eroticism to keep the discerning reader interested and enabling us strangers to learn a little about the USA. I have always liked your style so keep up the good work! Thanks, Pete

thank you

This series is without doubt my alltime favorite on this site. So rich in history of and about Route 66. I did something simular but went the other way, from Los Angeles to Amarillo, Texas, in the early 70's. Not much is left of the route anymore. To bad more people don't do the research that should be done with a story like this. Again, thanks for a wonderful story

That my friend was a brilliant series. If it was a movie, I would have gone and seen it and bought it when it became public to watch again and again. You will probably catch some hell about the vague and few sex scenes, but you had enuff in my opinion. Sad that the route 66 she loved caused her so much pain , but fitting that's where she died. Thanks for the many hours of entertaining reading