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by MrDawnFluffles

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good story idea but for me the story is rushed. A more vivid description will help the story flow easier (instead of straight to the sex) and explore the emotional aspects a little more. Just my personal opinion, good luck.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Needs a sequel

Def

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I'm MrDawnFluffles, an erotic fetish artist from Canada. I'm a 19yo woman, and I'm a huge slut. I'm into just about any fetish you can think of, from Scat to Guro. And tamer stuff & fluff, too. I call myself a lesbian, but I'm probably bi (just not into human men ig.), and I l...