by BrendaD
For a swcond, I was worried Patty would cross the border of just play and real (cruel) domination, but I was happy to read through the whole story. The whole story is great so kinky, I wish I was in Jens place. I really like the pleasant endings you write in your stories, showing that aftercare and going back to the normal relationship state after a scene is an important part of any long lasting bdsm relationship.
Wonderful chapter Brenda. I second QJH1S0's remarks on you're focus with aftercare. Sthe scenario was kinky, full of tension and desire. I enjoyed every minute I spent reading it.
It amazes me of the complexity that this story takes in bridging bdsm and normal relationships. Wonderful read!
I enjoyed that. Sensory Deprivation AND Predicament Bondage? What a great combination. I like how the characters are revealing themselves slowly. Patty is a perfect "Fentle Domme". Jen is clearly growiing throgh the new experiences. And the third person was a very nice / naughty touch. I hope the mystery person returns.