All Comments on 'Jennifer and the Grumpy Old Man'

Reasonable plot. The continual changes in tense were extremely irritating and sometimes confusing.

I love that Story a LOT! The only "complain" could be, that i think it would be even better with more Details. Im talking of the old men and i.e. how their cocks look, smell and taste (swallowing?). Could add to the degradation. But that being said: it is a fantastic Story. I hope for a sequel!

Good story. I would have liked her to call them "sir" right until the end. Loved the discipline bits.