All Comments on 'Jerri! Naked!'

I have to be honest here, the story was predictable...but then, I have literally read EVERY story in this section of Literotica.

That being said, it does not detract from the fact that you are a skilled writer, nor does it have any bearing on the fact that it was a hot read. Would seriously love to see this one blossom and mature. Please continue this story.

That was hot. Hope there is more parts to this story.

Thank you for sharing the wonderful story.

I echo the comments "More?" made and looking forward to more to come.

I agree with the other comments. This was a fun and exciting story and I would enjoy at least another chapter or two.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Pleasr more!!!

One of my favorite lines in this story is when David was fucking Carl: "I couldn't say anything, completely surprised at how good it was feeling. Every so often, he'd hit something inside me that shot waves of pleasure throughout my body." - that was exactly how I felt the 1st time I was fucked by a big cock (it was a BBC). I love your detailed description of how the sub was feeling in this situation (which I am).

I also was actually surprised by the twist ending (I know that some readers might have seen it coming). I expected the CD angle but didn't anticipate the shemale part of the story. However, this really REALLY turned me on so much that I came into my hand when I read that she had a cock (I then ate my cum -- yum, yum). This is a big fantasy of mine and I can't wait to read the next chapters.

Fantastic story. Well done.

Very exciting and romantic .. what we wouldn't do to get closer to someone we have grow to love from a distance, out of our reach or at least it seemed that way .. his life has opened up so much now that he is a third person in their circle of love and pleasure .. please write more .. TG Tiffany

Imagination is great, but reality sometimes suck. Your story found a good balance and deserves a 2nd or even a third chapter. Use your imagination and surprise us.

That was very hot! I hope you add to the story.

Please give us more of this story and his gradual transformation

I really enjoyed the story. I wish I could be so lucky.

I really enjoy the stories about the girl/woman next door that turns out to have a surprise in her panties. A fantasy since my teens when the very introverted girl next door to me kept to herself so much that I wondered if she might really be a boy that liked to dress up like I did. That fantasy got busted all to hell when she got knocked up in high school, but by then I was sure I'd never want to dress up or suck another cock and the fantasy had mostly faded away.

A nice fun sexy romp

Delicious, sexy, lucky boi.