by jaysmusings
Ignore this jerk! He's just disappointed he didn't think of this storyline, and he obviously doesn't understand fantasy. This is NOT meant to be realistic, fool!
Great use of tension and build up. Definitely keep them coming. We all know a girl like Jess (indeed some of us have been lucky enough to has a girl.like Jess as a partner) and know the bittersweet thrill of watching your girl fall under another mans spell.
My husband wants me to do one of these shoots. If I was guaranteed it would be this hot, I would agree in a heartbeat.
Great addition, love the story so far but I’m dreading the skeevy boss aspect. So far everything is within limits in a sexy fun way. I’d still prefer it if they were honest with each other so that they could enjoy themselves more. I really don’t want to read about his boss manipulating and threatening either of them, blackmail stories just don’t do it for me, I hate bullies.
Tess (uk)