All Comments on 'Jess Watching'

Naughty girl.

Santa always checks his naughty list twice

Great story. Hope it continues.

Please continue with the story, it has alot of potential to go along way.

Hope you will do more!

Now get into that shower!

You're sexy. I'm just an ol' guy who'd love to meet a talented girl like you. Maybe we could correspond here. Feel confident in what you write. It's good.

Dave

Well done. I enjoyed that.

I love the visual thoughts, sounds effects, and verbiage is great. I was hoping for a page two.. as I am still quite hard.

It is so polished that it is difficult to believe it is your first. Looking forward to more. Thank you!

This was so good, I loved every bit of it. Please tell me a second part will be coming out.

Got me reaching for my cock. Love to read more.

Very well written!! Please write more!!

Well written, and believable. I would have done the same thing.

Well written and truly believable, loved it.

Good work! The pacing was excellent and you included just the right amount of detail. Yes I would like to see an expansion of this. Do more interesting things happen at this camp?

God! I searched forever to find something like this. Basically one of the only story types that turns me on is women in a platonic, communal sleep setting like college dorm mates or siblings, where one overhears the other pleasuring herself and she gets turned on enough she does it too. Not sure why. Is there a tag for this kind of thing? Thanks for the story!

this was so erotic, i too would love to witness this, it would be so hot to watch, and even let her see me witness her coming. wow.