by Night-Wolf
Why did you stop this story in the middle of the story line?
When are you going to continue it?
I know it’s been awhile but you have a gift.
Entertain your readers and continue your tale.
This is one of my problems with "authors" on this site. They write a chapter or two and then just stop... Don't submit unless you've written the entire story. That way you don't leave readers in a lurch.
Where is the rest of this intriguing story? I feel left out in the cold...
I am sorry that Night-Wolf either forgot how to write or passed on to a better world. I would so much liked to have been able to readthe rest of this sory,
Please, I enjoyed what you have writen so far. I feel like I have picked up a good book that someone has torn out all the last pages.
When are you, going to finish this story? I really cannot believe, you are going to waste this great story.
Please continue the story, i love the wild west, and this story is just starting to get good.
Why have you not continued your story line. When it just starts to get interesting you quit.
loving the story. surprised your not more well known. can't wait to read the next chapter. 5 stars
This is a neat story line and crossing the lines of western and mind control, has a very intreging reach.
Great story! This could be a great book. I want MORE. Really good stuff.
Cliff hangers that is. Cliff hangers are evil. Please, PLEASE, submit the next parts.
Please continue with this story, it is amazing very visual and intense. I cant wait to read on.
This was worse than ripping out the last chapter of a paperback. Looking forward to your next submissions as there must be a lot more to come, keep up the good work.
I was hooked from the first story - now left dangling waiting for more - almost literal BDSM.