All Comments on 'Jesse's Reunion'

Wonderful story. I hope chapter two is close.

For a first time story, this is great! I voted 5. good story line, few if any editing errors

Great story and great writing skill.

Definitely needs a follow up chapter.

Definitely needs a follow up chapter.

I'm going to go ahead and give it a five, but I think that it might have been better if it had been a touch longer and perhaps a little more 'lead-in' time before things got truly hot and heavy. Still, for a first story, wonderfully done!

Excellent story. As the reader you did a good by transferring their connection to us. Not many writers can do this effectively

I'll join the choir looking forward to the next chapter. Hope to hear more about their future together!

Kinda weak ending. You should have finished this in one submission.

Solid story here. Looking forward to more from you, both this story and others you may have in mind.

Marvin

Screams for more.

I throughly enjoyed this story! If I could give it ten stars I would! Great wro!

Very nice!

Great first story!

I hope you will carry this on it would be a great book.

That was sweet.

Please write more

Well done. I loved the sweet development of their attraction and their willingness to delve deeper in spite of their relative status. I know, bad pun, but I couldn't resist. Thanks for sharing your story.

YOU BETTER FINISH THIS!!!