All Comments on 'Jesse's Story: A Woman's View Ch. 09'

One thing has struck me about this series. It's a good rendition of a typical swinging relationship from a female perspective. It deals with it in a realistic manner, without a lot of the fluff that is so common on Lit. That, in and of itself, lifts itself above most stories of this type. I would also like to encourage the writers to not simply limit themselves to autobiographical stories. There are far to few good writers that have actual experience in the lifestyle. It would be good to see you step out of narratives and stretch your wings into the world of fiction as well. These could still be loosely based on your real life experiences without being held back by them. Eventually, you will run out of autobiographical material and it would be shame to lose you at that point. Keep writing and keep up the good work.