All Comments on 'Jessica Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Still good & still hot

Your doing a nice job. Keep it going. Thank You Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great - but time problems?

Again a great story, just like the previous parts. But you changed from past tense to present tense during the story (quite early actually), and I'm not sure if you intended to do so. I prefer past tense for stories...

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