All Comments on 'Jessica the Newbie Reporter Ch. 03'

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superhoopdownundersuperhoopdownunder4 months ago

Superb I love reading about Jess.

It is so exciting.

Jlyn1Jlyn14 months ago

I can't take how witless Willey is or the disrespect and humiliation. She has a two-year-old, and never in this story has she shown any motherly affection. She has cuckolded him and is well aware and enjoying cheating on him. There is no redeeming value here. I could go on but I'll just quit reading. 😡

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So far I am loving how quickly Jess is falling into corruption, letting herself be teased and touched won’t be long till she has the full thing, I would like more on her pov and not Willey’s all the time except when he’s interacting with Linda more

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great stuff. While your ongoing magnum opus is my favorite story on the site, I appreciate the decision to go with a sped up pace/slightly less drawn out corruption compared to the Lana main story, while still managing to enrich the world you’ve created with backstory for some of the characters that live in it. A rare talent at work, and I’m grateful.

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Update: 04/24/24 * Good progress on Ch 14b of Naive Teacher * Will break it down into b and c, so I can get them out in a timely manner :) ~~~ * General Notes: Planning to go back to Ch1 and rewrite some dialogs and things like that. My style of writing changed a bit and I ...