All Comments on 'Jessica's Awakening Ch. 01'

Ridiculous, but it really hits the spot. 5*

Good start, write more

Developed quickly on relationship, feelings and erotica. Truly a sexy start with lots of nudity and passion devloing lust, love, sex along with a story line filled with promise.

While short, you certainly set the stage, or what I like to call the "erotic field" shared by all the ladies' combined hormones and pheromones intermingling in the shared space. Seeing pet Katie used to sample the various vaginal wares while the audience were stimulating each other was viscerally palpable, even with just the descriptive words. For Jessica, being new to such intense experience, it must have been overwhelming and certainly served to negate all or any misgivings she might have had coming to the party. Can't wait for Part 2. Yum.

Looks like a lesbian orgy is awaiting in chapter2 and beyond!! Great story so far