All Comments on 'Jessica's Incestuous Bitch's'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
BRILLIANT

A lovely continuation to this series and well worth 5 stars.

The thought of her father becoming a Cuckold Daddy is so exciting. Thete are so many things which could happen now.

Really lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good topic, maybe slower

It's a good idea and definitely has a lot of potential. The focus on dom/sub gives the relationship another dimension, you can feel the differences in power and control.

For me though, your stories progress a bit too fast, too smooth. I'd like it more if you added doubt, even reluctance into the mix. More tension and conflict would help highlight how extreme these relationships are.

Pretty much everyone who grew up together is disgusted at the idea of having sex, not to mention at least one of the girls is likely to be straight. Hardcore domination is also something you don't jump into right away. All of that can be resolved one way or another, eventually, but it's not this simple. At least for me, the journey - the breaking down of inhibitions - is the fun part.

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