All Comments on 'Jessie Ch. 04'

Four chapters in and I already have the gist of this story. 70 percent of the text will be wasted on the cut/pasted sex scenes (easy to insert: spank, fuck, repeat - where is the "ingenuity" that doms generally get known for?) that litter the time needed for the author to develop some form of plot and the next failure to catch up with them.

Sad to see someone with a scant sense of literary talent, waste it on the repetitive and mundane crap that has pissed away this "reader's" time... thus far.