- BDSM
- Jill's World Ch. 05
- Page 12
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TO JULIE: No time limit
JULIE: I suppose that will do Just take your time and make sure you understand and agree with every line of the contract
JULIE: Stop being rude
TO JULIE: What are you talking about?
JULIE: Sorry Tired and we both have a lot of reading to do
JULIE: Exhibit A Text if you have questions I will mark questions on the rest of it
TO JULIE: Okay I will text before I go to sleep for sure
TO JULIE: Thanks Jules For helping me You are the absolute best!
JULIE: What are BFFs for?
I went to Exhibit A and found the checklist of like ten pages of BDSM activities. Jill had already marked them for experience, yes or no. She had also written NO on some of the items on the list, actually three items on the list that had to do with feces. I agreed with her assessment. She also had humiliation as a 5, whether I wanted it there or not.
Basically, I had to go through the list and write "No" for it is something I never will do, or a number from 0 to 5. 0 is something I never want to do, 5 is something that wildly excites me. And I had to google some things and write "needs explanation" for other things because even after reading them, I didn't understand what's and why's for a lot of things.
By the time I finished, and Julie was right, I had written the number 2 more than anything else, it was nearly midnight and I was fighting sleep.
TO JULIE: Going to glance over it and say I read it
Checklist is done
I'm exhausted
You still awake?
If not, sweet dreams Jules
Thanks for all the help
I love you
Ten minutes later, I assumed Julie had fallen asleep, like I wanted to do. But, as I read through the contract, I couldn't stop reading. There was so much detail and thought put into this document. I was overwhelmed by it all and was not entirely sure if this was a good idea, a great idea or a horrible idea, as I read though the content.
JULIE: Sorry Care I dozed off See you in the morning! I can't stay up anymore
That came through right about midnight. I laughed to myself. I mean, midnight is late, but not crazy late.
TO JULIE: Sweet Dreams!
And I stayed up until two in the morning, reading and making notes and questions and changes and strikes in the contract. Finally, first read completed, I had to get some sleep. I rolled over and it seemed I had barely closed my eyes when morning came.
- COMMENTS
lovercat2942over 5 years agoWell, Carrie is past the evil wench Rebecca, but at what price? Running up and down the empty bleachers naked for Julie, returning the panties to the cheerleaders, and the humiliating speech to Rebecca and then to Brad in front of the crowd. And then owing money to Julie? By the way, I didn't like money being a part of the bargain, but it was in character for Courtney to devise the money plan. All and all it worked, so......
Add the mystery of Julie - I can't figure out if she really *is* Carrie's BFF. She seems to do some helpful things but then other things that don't seem to be in Carrie's best interests. She has to find a way to get past her resentment of Carrie's not telling her about the adventures with Darla until after the fact - that resentment, to me, seems to get in the way insofar as Carrie is concerned.
I like the scene in which Jill traces her history in the dom-sub "business" She really likes Carrie and wants to help her grow. And I *love* Sue and her attitude towards Carrie.
Questions for me: What is going to happen with Bobby, the new nemesis for Carrie in group? She is no Rebecca but to me her sadism leads me to recall some of Jill's story. And how is Jill's checklist going to influence the story?
Anonymousover 5 years agoI’m so glad we finally got a bit of Jill’s background...and it was a relief to know that she has internal conflicts, regrets, and mistakes. So much of the genre has the alpha being perfect, which is a bore and strains credibility. I’m glad you’re feeling free to avoid gratuitous scenes, and not worrying that readers haven’t got their rocks off recently. You’ve done some great set-ups for those scenes anyway, so keep up the good work!
Anonymousover 5 years ago... you should focus more on dominance in the sex acts.
What your characters had for breakfast is not important.
And let's be honest, nobody cares about what is the color of their socks or how often the neighbors mowed their lawn or the TV shows they watched at home before going to sleep.
Please, don't turn a 3 pages chapter into a 20 drawn out meaningless one.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI love this story starting with the beginning in Darla's Games. Although I am a male I would love to be Carrie. I am looking forward to the next chapter you have the chance to write. Carrie has made so many mistakes it just shows her human side and she has embraced her submissive and lesbian nature. Can't wait to read more! Great Story and characters especially Carrie and Julie.
Anonymousover 5 years agoCould I get the last page of the story, or perhaps a summary of no more than 1000 words of how it ends? I'd like to know how the main character ends up but I'm so tired of reading the general stupidity of the writer. This story is beyond tedious.
