All Comments on 'Jim and Edie Again Ch. 13-14'

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tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110almost 3 years ago

I say again that I wonder if people are such quick converts in real life. I’m not knockin’ it. I’m just skeptical. I might even be one of the converts. I wonder though about my conservative wife? She might just surprise me. I like that SteveWallace has taken a departure from “Loosening Up”. The chapters were too long and there was too much extraneous verbiage I felt wasn’t necessary to the story. This story and “Doc And The Porn Star” are perfect even if he beats the polyamory drum to death. I loved it. A FAVORITE.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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