by TwistedManc
This story is so hot!!! I absolutely love it. I’d love for you to continue with it and see where it goes.
Would definitely love a Claire & Jason POV of this. Also a suggestion: marking the slut more, a tattoo maybe would be nice.
Well written story. I think Joanne's adventures can go on. Could be even rougher with more tattoos and piercings. And play the whore more.
A not so quick recount would be nice.We just don't need to re read what you've already written, just how it all started, what gave them the idea...
I would love for the story to continue a while longer now that she knows who her blackmailers are she should be a little more responsive especially to Claire. would love for her to be more controlled at work somehow after she owns the company so dressing more slutty won't get her fired. Whatever you decide. You have done great with this story And I thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you let us know what you decide.
Pappasleaze!
I’d love to see Joanne getting ordered to workout more, go to a tanning salon regularly and hope she is forced to get her hair cut in a sexy style like an undercut. Maybe she could get braids in her hair and her pussy shaved in a black only barbershop.
Would be awesome to read the backstory. Would be quite interesting if her blackmailer is her son’s classmate or bully.
Make her lose everything and ends up as a whore or a dump secretary with young black boyfriend
Story is quite pedestrian, nothing that hasn't been post a thousand times before here. Just different character names is all.
Great fun to read … please continue … Am not a big fan of POV changes … preferably continue with more adventures for the slut and a credible plot … either towards a stable state with more friendly fun &games or further degradation and downfall… some background could be added in dialogues or sparse flashbacks.
I appreciate the length of the chapters and the summary at the start. The action is not very creative, but good enough. She really needs a collar or something to emphasize her slut/pet status. Certainly worth continuing.
Wild story. I read it after seeing "bathroom fuck" in the spin selection. My wild times: I blew my high school boyfriend in the men's room once but many guys in their cars and in college, I got fucked on a desk.
Love your story. Please finish her journey and let us see how you want it to go. I hope you finish
Oh, the back story definitely! It would be nice to see her skills develop as she develops a following...