All Comments on 'Joanne's Fall Pt. 11 – Basement Fucking'

This is getting more and more idiotic by the day, how can yourself think this way? Truly fantastic... Nice wrtiting, but the story is not my cup of tea. Just hope we Readers get justice for a few people.

I enjoy nc stories as much as the next person. Invariably it involves a relatively innocent girl/guy being controlled via blackmail or kidnapping via clearly illegal means. But at some point there has to be hope or rebellion or a potential rescue. Thank you for continuing this story, but except for a miserable revelation to her family or death, there really is no place further down to go. How about starting a new one. The entrapment is always more stimulating than the acts that follow. Ideally, wrap it up with a reasonably realistic ending.

Regrettably, I agree with the previous. The previous chapters were intense and somewhat entertaining, but I think a line has been crossed.

Not my cup of tea either, but very well written. I know you don't like suggestions but I think now with the ass tattoo Jason will see it and go ballistic as HIS bitch wa to be used for black dick and pussy, he will need to confront Neil and have him back off. or at least I hope. to many master spoil the pot of soup.

Pappasleaze!

Great story... we readers mainly just see chapter wise only, but you the auther sees a big picture... you can see a way to keep this story going intrrsting.. so far its great for me... it's what to expect from a blackmail story. You've outdone your self eith it. Keep up the great work.

Great story. Very well written. I'm curious to find out what Jason will do when he sees the Anal Who're tattoo.

You write a great story, every week you should publish a part of it, so that Joannes gets more tattoos of a black cross between her breasts, a tattoo on her breast, another tattoo around her navel, and stars tattooed around her anus, it's fun that Joannes gets a ring in her navel and another on her tongue And her nose, her humiliation must continue to fuck more people in the street and spend the whole night as a prostitute in the street, also in her company she must be forced to work in her slutty clothes, for the bullies to force her to lick a dildo and put it on the wall and insert it in the ass and spread the video on the web Please continue this great story

I do not agree with other commentators, the course of events for the story is logical and wonderful, it is something out of the ordinary, it is new events and not repetitive like other stories and other writers. You are writing a really great story, continue writing the story until Part 50

Just read the story, this chapter is really exciting, you should force Joannes to get rid of her old conservative clothes and throw them in the trash and get more slutty and youthful clothes, skinny jeans, leggings, tight crop tops and miniskirts, it's sexy and cool to show a new and more teenage look, that Her master shaves the right side of her hair and dyes the rest of her hair purple, it's great that she gets a tattoo on the upper back between the shoulders, also it's great that Neil the waiter takes her to college in his teenage clothes, you're a great writer, but you're slow with new chapters I hope To publish new chapters faster

Great story Focus on making Joannes skinnier Claire takes her to the gym and Joannes gets muscles She gets rid of her big old clothes Claire gives her a diet program she eats only fruits and milk. And she is forced to work in the company and wears tight and uncomfortable clothes during work, her employees insult her, and she has sex with a young employee in the bathroom of her company. She gets yelled at in the company, and the employees watch her humiliation. become less valuable within the company

Please hurry to edit the next parts. It is the greatest story I have ever read

great stuff...make her an anal only tattooed slut despite her denial.....she will come round.

Really curious to see what happens to all the characters in this story.

And also curious to know if Joanne can still shit like a normal person.

There are some threads to follow that can’t be found in other nc stories like Claire’s reaction aboutthe other blackmailer and Joanne’s son, but there’s too much degrading tattoos to my taste, but the author must do what he wants. The writing and characterization is good for the theme

Agree, getting very idiotic

Wait for Part 12 Hurry up to write and edit it. You are a writer with a wonderful imagination

It is a great story, the style of writing is wonderful, and the events are varied, but there is a slowness in editing and publishing the parts. It should be a maximum of a week between one chapter and the next. Also, the parts are short. The part should be more than 20,000. It should be twice the size, and it should contain more events. I can't wait for part 12 please keep writing this great story

Agree with the comments there must be an agreement between jason and nail on sharing joannes. It's really exciting that her son slipped and humiliated. You are writing a wonderful story, I hope you will take the comments seriously

Great, wonderful, and entertaining, you are excused to take the opinions of our readers seriously. He suggested that Joannes wear denim shorts and a crop top and make her run from the house to the gym, to be seen by some neighbors, the gym coach watches the tattoo and takes her to fuck in the ass, then the coach forces her to massage his muscles and wash him with soap during the shower and suck the cock, he puts semen on her hair He directed her face and took a video to bully her next time, forcing her to clean the gym's bathrooms

The series of events is fantastic and wonderful. Joannes is 45 years old. She has lost her period and she cannot become pregnant. She must be converted to a girl instead of an old woman. Her master takes money from her and sends Joannes to surgery to transplant an ovary. After the surgery, she gets her period and becomes pregnant with her master's black child.

Keep up your great work

A story well written, the ideas are great, it's a great story

Great story

love stories of unfaithful cheating wives.wives that find out they are bi.find out what black men offer.divorce isnt certain.many men love the wife so much they will accept the wife needs to do this.esp if the husbands know they cant satisfy wife in bed.many men want the wife to have black babies.in story husband accepts her weight loss.the clothes change.all women are either bi.or lesbian.all women love anal.the difference the women have to be introduced to bi/lesbian/anal the right way.early enough .(before the women gets to old)there are to many spelling errors in story have a proof reader.wont ask how she isnt pregnant yet with a black baby.wont ask how she hasnt gotten disease.my biggest issue.when the wife spends 7 days live with owners.how in world she never gets a call from husband / son / the multiple men the wife has had sex with.a week and nobody contacted the wife?????????her hair needs a major change.she got enough tatoo.however she needs more piercing.wife goes to gym.she needs time at tan salon.wife needs much more situations that she is forced to expose her body.something not touched on in story.or maybe small part.does wife drink alcohol? smoke?if she does.then this needs to increase.if she doesnt..then she really needs to start..ie going to bars with owners and alone. drinking alcohol at bars. the wife (Joanne) need much longer fingernails.she needs proper heels.many men are cowards.would rather let the wife do near anything they wanted right or wrong..rather then live life without them.considering in start of story husband and wife hardlly talk. hardly spent any time together.hardly do anything as a couple.many husbands would rather share wife with others rather then lose the wife

interesting story

I hope that two chapters of this story will be published together. I hope that a chapter will be published every 3 days. It is the most enjoyable story I read.

I make the suggestion that blackmailers and bullies get together, force Joanne's to feminize her son, have her son take hormones and become a shemail, and they both get a fuck.

interesting story

Keep going, keep going, until the 1000th part. You say you've written a great story

Your story is nice, it's an entertaining story, but some notes, you should explain how much she weighed before she lost 7 pounds and after she lost the weight, you should write more details about her clothes, it's great to be enslaved by new bullies, for example, a young man on the subway sees her tattoos and gets Fuck in the bathrooms of the metro station. She has not yet got her nose ring and her pussy. you didn't talk joannes do you smoke cigarettes. Joannes was the manager of her own company, so she wore a long skirt and a long shirt. Now she is a secretary, what are her new clothes while working? She drives a car, she must be forced to use public transportation and wear revealing and prostitute clothes while using the metro and bus I advise you to make the number of words in each chapter longer, to focus more on this story, and to publish the parts one by one.

interesting story

Love it!

great work

This work is the greatest work I have read in my life. You accept some suggestions from readers. I present my suggestion. Neil calls joannes in the morning telling her to get her denim shorts and blouse, and also to wear a bikini. Neil comes on a motorcycle standing in front of the house making noise and the neighbors see it, Joannes gets out and climbs in the back tying her arms on her waist Neil goes across the highway out of town stops at a gas station gives money to Joannes to buy a beer then heads towards the beach, forces Joannes to take off his shorts Denim and blouse and lounging on the beach in a bikini Neil puts tanning oil on joannes body rubs ass and boobs at the end of the day joanne gets a tan she goes and showers, then she gets denim shorts and blouse and she and neil go buy a burger then they go to a nightclub dancing at dawn You go back to the hotel and have a fuck.

Go far across the horizon! You are writing the greatest story in history

A sexy story, you write a nice story, keep going, you are a creative writer

I can't wait for the next part, you give us the best story,

Eagerly waiting for the next part

I am waiting for chapter 12, i hope it will be a long chapter and its words will be more

It's a fun story, Joannes and Nail go to a nightclub, meet a white teenager and a friend of Nail, they go to the dance floor together, teenager sticks coock on Joannes' anal, and Joannes gets kisses, after Joannes drinks a lot of beer, they go to the alley behind the club and get a fuck.

To get joanne to get a heart tattoo around her nipples and a tattoo behind her ear, and a star tattoo around the anal hole, please run in his book next chapter. To get a divorce from her husband, and Joanne, unable to afford the costs of living, after the lady seizes her money, she goes to clean the car of the new company manager and provide sexual services to her company's clients. Joanne becomes pregnant and her breasts fill with milk to nurse her black baby. This story is great, brown and write part number 1000000

You are a great author

Your stories make me high until I reach for the sky, you are great. I like to see the context of events change every time and every season. Claier sees the new tattoo on Joannes anal, decides that the bitch Joannes should get an added punishment, and you reinforce her self-contempt, she should get every day humiliation. For that reason, Claier decides to plan a trip with her colleagues in the company, and Joannes takes with her all of Claier's friends, ages 20, 25, and 28. They go to a city on the beach, and Joannes pays for the trip. During her stay at the chalet with her friends, Claier forces Joannes to lick her pussy and film her. The only clothes Joannes is allowed to wear is a bikini. She goes to the beach every day for a week to get a tan. Claire forces her to poop and clean her ass with the bathroom door open Claier's girlfriends watch her pee and wipe her ass and pussy. Joannes makes food daily for Claier and her friends and serves beer for them only Joannes wears a bikini.

fun story

Putting silicone in Joannes's breasts and injecting fillers in her lips will also make her look great, injecting her with hormones or going for an operation and getting a new ovary

I agree with the readers, the story should be 30,000 words longer. You make a wonderful story. It is the most wonderful story I have read in my life. I wish you success always in writing the next chapters.

I'm writing more chapters You are a great author, but I express my opinion, it is really interesting that shemale enters the context of the events of this story. New guy fucks Joann in the ass and becomes her master takes her with him to make a porn movie or shoot a porn magazine cover

Best story I've ever read

fun

Great story! very hot

Really looking forward to the next chapter. I'd love to see how the dynamic between Joanne and her son develops. It would be great to see Joanne teasing her son and going back to normal briefly. She aught to get her hair cut short at a barber shop while her son watches.

Keep up the great work

I am waiting for the next parts eagerly to know the new events

Conquering, subjugating and humiliating Joannes is hot

Put a red pepper tattoo on her shoulder or ass, your story is great

Joanne craves what she hates. Amazing story!

Dragging out to long!