All Comments on 'Joanne's Story Pt. 01'

Intriguing storyline

More please

Punctuation and grammar need a little work. "I won't repeat the two words as obviously they are not what you want to here." -- "... want to hear."

There wasn't enough lead-up. They go out to a nice dinner, she snuggles with her manager in the lounge, then she wakes up -- where? In the spare room? How'd she get there? Did her tiny little manager carry her to the bed? :-)