by Talemaster
Ignore those comments about it being mislabed etc.. I thought it was absolutely hilarious! Android sex in a space mining camp in a galaxy far far away etc (blah blah blah) belongs in this category.
A man on a mission to get a girl to come - a noble quest for sure! LOL If it proved to be the last thing he did, he was gonna get that girl to come! As it turned out, it was! LOL
ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!!!
Well done :)
well written, mislabeled, ended up being a let down. it is horrific that the effect of being in love & a determined good lover is death. if i had been expecting the horror element i probably would have felt more positive about the story, but as it is i was just let down & kinda turned off by the whole thing. Sorry.
The ending totally ruined what was turning into a good story. Sorry, not good.
You should have put this under erotic horror. This was a good story but the guy dying from being a good lover was horrific.