by Daddy_0H
I was ready to read joey trying out a cock himself but still love this chapter
I can truthfully say, I'm enjoying this so far, despite it being miles past the point of believability. It's just certain things that bother me (aside from the feeding aspect with his sister which is a turn-off for me) - for example, what did his brother sister & friend do to lose what small dicks they had? I mean, I can see the bully being punished, but the others? You went and gave the existing trans in the story a larger dick, which makes it weird, It's almost like he's punishing them - all but Kelly. As for Frankie, I was thinking Joey was finally going to get his turn on the bottom, but it seems more like Joey is going to change him to a cis girl. I'm still surprised he hasn't figured out how to give Stacey a dick to play with Stevie on occasion. And as I 'said with Frankie - he needs his turn to bottom. It will probably help is understanding of all the bottoms he's created. the only other thing I don't like is Kevin he's kind of an asshole, but then again, we al have that one friend who's kind of a dick. I am along for the ride though, even if its got oddities really short chapters and the fact that Literotica often doesn't show there being a next chapter most of the time,
Excellent story set and the different interactions with the group. If memory serves, Miss Roxanne still has her anal virginity to give to Joey so hoping that will happen in soon and be completely airtight.
Awesome work
Thanks everyone for the continued encouragement and suggestions. Couple things: The first 40 chapters were written and uneditied prior to posting on Lit, so that was the reason behind the constant posting. A lot easier for me to edit than, write and edit. Secondly, I really like the suggestions and may incorporate them into the story going forward. I'm halfway through writing chapter 44. Try not to hate on Kevin too much. Aside from being gregarious, he's really a good friend to Joey and Steve and would do anything for them. Lastly, I put the seeds of Joey becoming fully aware of the needs of a femboy/trans/gay person in this most recent chapters. I plan to have him get some updated features from his app, that will allow him to 'help' his friends/family that want to change from M2F while others may want to just be feminine. On a quick note, I kinda like BBW, so I hope it's not too distracting for the reader, but if there's others that enjoy it too, let me know. Otherwise I may lay off a bit, or start a new series focused on "my big fat sister!!". Tx all
Forgot how much I was excited for the daily upload, but even more excited to see what you got planned!
It's been already two weeks bro where are you. are you going to mass release