All Comments on 'John & Argie Ch. 08'

by Paris Waterman

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marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Nice End to the Story!!

That was a nice end to this story with them getting back together. I like how you had them being playful with each other at the end which was nice. Good job with the series

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
They will probably be OK for a while

But one or the other will start to think that the other partner is having more sex than themselves. They will start to feel jealous and all hell will erupt. Finally they will find that the love that they had for one an another is dead, and only resentment is left between them.Thanks for the story.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
last chapter

i scanned the first and the last. so they will (happily)maintain a facade...and effectively have an open marriage? my bet is that he will be unable to have her doing the same and the marriage will fall apart a bit later.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 7 years ago
I wanted to trash it

But avleast she got what she wanted n the RAAC. He is trash

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Disappointed

After investing the time on the other chapters and your great character development, I was greatly disappointed with this chapter. He's trash, and she should've put him out at the curb.

Ms. Marie

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