by Paris Waterman
Spare us the satyr lipstick on this sociopathic pig
Why is everyone a critic and why do the critics generally leave their garbage anonymously? I thought your story was great! This site caters mostly to non-professional writers, so why would anyone expect every story to be professionally written and edited. I say to all the critics if you are not doing better (writing your own professionally turned out stories) then don't complain or don't read.
I hope he gets back to the shrink soon, and fills her up with cum. Maybe knocking her up. A good story line, with endless ways to go. Thanks for the post.....Rich
Great beginning to what I hope becomes a long story! Make the submissions a little longer.