All Comments on 'John Smith Inc. Ch. 05'

I love the direction this story is going.

It's beginning to cum together! 😉

Wow talk about a very good story, very timely considering this kidnapping and trafficking is worse then most people know, more please

I've been enjoying your writing can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for your encouragement.

I just uploaded the newest chapter, give it about a week to post.

I apologize for not posting sooner. Like others I work full time.

I pledge I will complete this story and The Jewel of Desire.

Thanks again.

Looks like some of the new series plotlines are coming together, great! Still a few mistakes and tense boo-boos, but not nearly as many as in the early chapters of the first series, a Gift from my Father, ... you are getting better, or you have some [art time help, ... I think it is you improving your English grammar and spelling skills, ... you are getting there, keep at it, ... ;-) TTFN