All Comments on 'Jon Calls Alli'

How about lying about your first encounter with Jon? That was your first mistake.

I have heard about swinging where spouses sometimes play separately but need permission from the other spouse AHEAD of time for lots of reasons and this is their rule. which this seems to be BUT then why screw up your own situation and rules by not telling/getting permission ahead of time from the other. Then its cheating and breaking your own rules with a pissed off spouse. The writer seems to be breaking this couples own rules in which case as happened the husband is pissed. If this were real divorce her she is breaking the rules and disrespecting the husband. Swinging usually leads to divorce especially playing separately.

To the author, thank you kindly for taking the time and making the effort to write this story. I read it and enjoyed it.

I note, as per usual, that group of “readers” have decided to rubbish your work. This is unfortunately common in the “Loving Wives” section of this website.

I’m not sure if you are aware of it, but you have a great deal of power when it comes to comments. I encourage you to delete the comments which are rude and useless. You do have that power, author.

Below is the process you need to follow to delete all of the rude comments.

1. Log-in to Literotica

2. Click on Works on the left hand side in the Literotica control panel

3. Locate the story in question

4. Click on the “word bubble” icon on the left, on the far right hand side of the story you have located

5. Locate the comment you wish to delete and then click on the rubbish bin on the far right hand side of the comment in question

6. Click on delete comment, and you’re done.

Trust me and believe me when I say that these trolls will soon grow weary of posting nasty comments on your work if you just delete all their comments quickly, consistently, and without any mercy.

With her lack of respect of a mutual agreement and her husband,he needs to let her go she is disrespecting cheater who cannot see her actions are wrong. A divorce after moving all funds where she cant get them. The husband needs to sort out jon as well. A well aimed shot at his nuts would show persuit of the wife was wrong.

1 star - given that your average rating for this story is down to 2.3, I don't have to say anything.

It is plainly obvious you like to write cuck/wimp/slut stories and not very people like them.

So I am just going to relegate your stories to my writer reject file and not read another.

Have a nice day.

so what is the purpose?

If you want to write stories then write stories. If you want to write stories that get mostly positive comments then read the stories that get mostly positive comments and figure out what story features drive those positive comments. If you are writing popular stories then the negative comments will be so greatly outnumbered by the positive comments that you won't care and the negative comments will appear narrow minded or unjustified. If you are writing unpopular stories as indicated by low ratings and a majority of negative comments then you have to accept, like a losing politician, that what you are writing is simply not satisfying or appreciated, and whose fault would that be? Read the second sentence above if you want to get positive comments.

If you don't care about negative comments then live with them. If you delete negative comments then you are broadcasting that you are thin skinned and too sensitive to be a successful writer. Commenters who encourage you to delete negative comments are simply looking for justification and camaraderie for their own cowardice and sensitivity; they want you to join their safe place. Puke.

Perhaps the best author's example when it comes to dealing with comments is Just Plain Bob. It appears that he writes stories, take'em or leave'em, and he treats comments the same. His stories and the resulting comments range from great to awful, which is about how the real world works. JPB's credential is not his unfailing greatness, but his maturity and honesty in dealing with the ebb and flow of his writing quality, and the comments it generates. You have to decide what kind of writer, and adult, you choose to be. Your choice will be obvious. Thanks for the effort.

Stupid narcissistic female dogs runnin' round loose again, Martha...