All Comments on 'Jones Farm Savages Ch. 02'

Oh yeah. The plot thickens. You are setting up for the fun and loving aspect of the story. I like the way you are introducing and developing the characters. I look forward to more chapters. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Being part native myself, I love this. Intrigue, conflict, deception, and certainly sex. Clearly Bethany is a dominant lesbian taking advantage of Ruth at the least. And Abigail rides herd on Jesse's simple minded ass. There's a lot of story here, and I hope you make it lengthy. But in the end, I hope we have James giving the tickle pickle to all seven women, butch lesbian, and hen packing harpy included. Five gigantic stars.

So far I'm loving this one.

Great story. 5 stars. Please continue. Thanks

Even though English is obviously not their first language, the author is really trying to make this as good a story as possible. My only real criticism is the use of the word woman in both singular and plural form. Woman = 1. Women = 2 or more.

Thank you for another enjoyable chapter.