All Comments on 'Jordan's New Life Ch. 02'

by Dick0420

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redlion75redlion759 months ago

Well that explains my earlier question. But why 2 different orphanages?

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

Too many characters too fast. Well written sex scenes, but it is impossible to understand the relationships, other than the fact they are somehow related...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Liked the story the sex scene was okay!! But theses short chapter suck but pleas continue 4 stars!!!

Dick0420Dick04209 months agoAuthor

Thanks for commenting! The reveals are going to be a slow burn. Again, sorry for the confusion.

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