All Comments on 'Josh, Jake and Sally'

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YoloSwagginsYoloSwagginsabout 1 year ago

I miss your previous stories :( Keep up a good writing, i really love how you put black impregnation in our atories!

mrlovemaker77mrlovemaker77about 1 year ago

Glad your back and please repost amanda's contract and maybe a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The quality of the writing is excellent. A little logic or common sense, maybe some anticipation, hesitation, etc., would be good. Children aren't sexy though, regardless of color.

OOAAOOAAabout 1 year ago

HOT story!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very beautiful, and very loving story, though I think Sally would be cheating on Josh if she met Jake without Josh being there. Hopefully in the next chapter Josh takes the trip with Sally. I think it is much healthier for the relationship if he watches Sally getting fucked by his friend and that he continues to clean up her creampies afterward, as that adds a tender and sweet element to the story. Furthermore, given how prior encounters went, it would not make sense for Sally to deny herself and Josh that pleasure. However, it doesn't make sense that Josh would be permitted to fuck Sally's stretched out pussy afterward. Doesn't seem to be any pleasure in that. Anyway, those are just my suggestions. You are a gifted writer, and I look forward to more stories, or the next installment of this masterpiece.

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 1 year ago

Sure, go on and visit Jake. Don't worry about me. I'll be moving to someplace else while you are gone and have you served when you get back. "No Worries'' BTW Just stay there with Jake. Since they are all his kids, he can support you and all his bastard kids. 5 stars Great writing, Great Story. I have always love slutty women. #Buster2U

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story! I think it is every woman's fantasy to be taken by a big black stud like Jake while her white husband watches. I think it is also every woman's fantasy to make her husband cleanup the creampie that the stud left in her. I know its mine. I am not sure most women would want their husbands to fuck them afterwards, though I would allow mine, but he would have to clean up his own creampie when he was finished. Regarding the moral conundrum of Sally visiting Jake alone, I think it is cheating under the circumstances. HOWEVER, I think it would also be racist if Josh protested of if Sally didn't go, and that would be harmful to Jake, whose feelings should be considered. Therefore, Sally, who is one lucky woman, should go, and Josh should feel good that the better moral choice was made.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent story... I can't tell whether it is fiction or if you are describing a current real life situation. If it is a current real life situation, then everyone should know about the 2006 study published in the Journal of Reproductive Medicine that shows that women who are breast-feeding and get pregnant are more likely to conceive twins. In addition, if Sally gets a shot of gonadotropins from her Doctor before she leaves town, that will increase the release of eggs too. Forgive me if you already know this, but even if Jake fills her with gallons of his semen (and it sounds like he has the ability to do that), Sally will only conceive one baby if she is ovulating with only one egg in her fallopian tube. I hope that helps, and I hope Sally gets the second set of twins she wants.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please! Please! Please ! repost your earlier stories that are no longer available to us.

You are definitely one of my favorite writers on this website. I love your stories !

2cruzin4bull2cruzin4bullabout 1 year ago

Excellent story. Keep writing.

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerabout 1 year ago

I love the ‘tongue in cheek’ style. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A follow up would be very hot, maybe after Sally gets her second pair of twins. Sally and Josh are out in public and everyone can tell Josh isn't the father. Maybe they're in the park on a lovely summer day, and Josh is burning with humiliation as he imagines what people are thinking. Then Sally decides to feed the youngest twins, and Josh's humiliation deepens from the stares they draw, but at the same time he secretly enjoys it...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I don't know why you removed your previous stories but it was definitely a disservice to those of us who appreciate your writing style and talent. I really enjoyed the way you wrote about the husbands going down on their unfaithful wives after the had been so well fucked and flooded with their black lover's sperm. Many cuckold stories contain scenes with the husband getting his creampie, but they are always best when he is willing or even enthralled to eat his wife's messy pussy. You do that situation so well and somehow keep the love between the couple out in front of the act. Thank you for your contributions to a wonderful website.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Next step is a gang bang where Sally moves to Africa to become the breeder cow for a village full of alpha BBCs

charliem100charliem1006 months ago

Liked the idea of Jake stopping in and being allowed to use Sally's body whenever he comes to town, but I never find the idea of an otherwise happy couple raising another man's kids hot.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

My wife found this story and we both enjoyed it tremendously. Anytime she finds a story about a white housewife getting black bred her eyes light up. You’re a very good writer and the story’s pacing was so fast we were left breathless afterwards, especially my wife.

She was a cheerleader in high school and had sampled plenty of black cock before she met me. Our foreplay is her telling me about her black sex escapades and having me jack off for her. Our sex life consists of me eating her pussy until it’s wet enough to take a thick, black 10-dildo. That keeps her in shape (loose enough) for the booty calls she gets from her black players.

She has me sit in a tub full of near boiling water twice a month for an hour and I’m effectively sterile. She likes to sit on the edge of the tub and make out with me while we ‘boil my white sperm”. Actually, the sound of my sperm screaming as we kill them is very erotic!

One of these days she will meet her ‘Jake’ and let him breed a black baby into her married, white womb. She, and most of her white, blond, cheerleader girlfriends also married nerds like me. However, they’re going to breed black which is the way Mother Nature intended. The Alpha breeds and the Beta changes diapers!

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Love how Sally allows Jake to take her white pussy when he wants. They know he’s bigger and better and it’s his right to enjoy her. Love her passively bending over as he forces his powerful dick in her. I can imagine her whining and her expression as he stretches her out by driving into her as hard as he can. I’d love watching him dominating my wife knowing I would let him make her a slut for him and using her to have his children.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Piękna historia , która przypomina nasze małżeństwo . Moja narzeczona była zerżnięta przez wielkiego czarnego jak kruk o 23 lata od niej starszego murzyna z Nairobi . Wyemigrował z Afryki za lepszym życiem i znalazł je u nas , na naszej wyspie gdzie pracuje jako pomocnik murarza . Jest to potężne chłopisko - prawie 2 m i ok 140 kg . wagi . Jest siwiejący i potężny i chuja ma długiego na 9 cali , grubego na 8,5 cala a łeb na prawie 10 cali a dość nisko wiszą ogromna jądra owłosione kępkami siwych włosów . Żona moja ma 178 cm i waży jakieś 65/70 kg i jest piękną kobietą z długimi rudymi włosami i pięknymi bardzo zgrabnymi nóżkami którymi owija lędźwie starego murzyna w czasie ruchania . On od jakiegoś czasu rucha moją żonę przy mnie , w naszej sypialni . Z jego cudownego chuja mamy piątkę dzieci a żona moja chodzi z szóstym , sześciomiesięcznym brzuszkiem zrobionym tym pięknym , wielkim czarnym jak smoła chujem . Wszyscy nasi znajomi i większość mieszkańców wyspy wiedzą , że ten ogromny murarz rucha i wychowuje moją żonę . Do ślubu szliśmy z jego dzieckiem w bardzo widocznym już brzuszku mojej żony . Kocham ją za to , co robi z murzynem i zawsze zlizuję nasiona murzyna wolno wypływające z pipki mojej żony , gdyż są gęste , treściwe ,silne i zdrowe

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