All Comments on 'Journey of Love Ch. 02'

loved it! keep going..

You should write some more. You can only get better and better.

Well described. Please continue writting. Suggestion - please include some instinctive speech do not focus too much on Medical technical terms .e.g. Bartholin's glands but Clit / Clitoris is fine. Losing her virginity could have been more detailed. e.g. as his cock pushed Her hymen guarding her virginity declared her innocence as she groaned "uh uh" . His cock rammed him tearing apart her precious protected hymen / virginity. She shrieked "Aah! Mummy!" Tears of pain rolled down .....

Lovely---my kind of caring, worshipful sex.

nice

Ooh! Love the story and the buildup. The sex was steamy too. Great work!