All Comments on 'Journey to becoming a Slave Pt. 01'

Perfect story and you are made for blackmen to enjoy. Some white girls are made to be owned.

This story honestly doesn’t make much sense. She’s 50 years old, married for 25 years and NEVER had an orgasm??? That’s incredibly bizarre. Was she asexual? Twenty-Five years of no experimentation is unbelievable (and mind numbingly depressing). Going from all of that to having unprotected sex with a stranger?!

Just how stupid is she?

Not only did they plan to meet up in a dive bar but they’re booked into rooms above it, nothing says celebrating your anniversary like staying in a crappy hotel above a dive bar. Now all of a sudden she’s a slut, she must be clutching her pearls at the horror.

Technical bits: I’d say that this is dub con as opposed to “forced”. I’d also suggest that if you’re intending on making this a DD : LG type of story that you include that in the Tags.

Best of luck luck with your writing.

Tess (uk)