All Comments on 'Judicial Punishment Lottery Pt. 04'

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Qwer12Qwer12over 1 year ago
That Is Entertainment

A fun and different twist to this type of story. Great characters and a plot with good storytelling. Love the little details and the explanations and find it an enjoyable read. Looking forward to where you will take as you have lots to work with now. So rock it on and make it the fun times it can be. Thanks for your time to write and publish. Cannot wait for next chapters. 5 stars of good times. Cheers

lecturelectureover 1 year ago

A "judicial punishment" story that had me smiling and nodding my head in agreement throughout. Masterful writing, superb characters

Gym52Gym52about 1 year ago

EXCELLENT

This story has been thought provoking.

jdb12399jdb1239910 months ago

This is one of the best chapters yet. The sheer normality of the 'behind the scenes' at the Correction Centre adds such a real element.

The scene where Shona canes Karen is excellently written and very hot on a couple of levels.

Really enjoying it.

lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

There is very kinky underpinnings in this series

EGRIEGRI7 months ago

I am continuing to enjoy this story. Shona's trauma in caning Karen to give her relief was well composed. The characters continue to be entertaining and a steady stream of good people. There hasn't been a hint of a villain and that is quite unusual on this site. Happily onward to chapter 5. Five stars

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The Tattooed Woman - 16 March: Chapter 1 of Tattooed Woman edited (again), rewritten and now on site. Changes in this version are based on constructive criticism I received. So, lets see what you think. Part 42 being written, in the offing and coming soon. Dramatis Perso...