All Comments on 'Juliana Jones and the Rod of Ra'

Ha ha, what an animating adventure. She needed Marion Ravenwood to help her.

J x

I laughed out loud. That was fun.

Being a fan of the Indiana Jones movies, I enjoyed your story. A lot. I love the image of the naked gonzo archaeologist escaping with the Rod of Ra in her ass. I'll bet Ra is glad to have his Ra escape the tomb and in such a nice way. 5*~~JB

More adventures with Juliana, please, and if inclined past adventures with Lara (OK, to mix games and movies, right?). That short piece so well crafted; easily visualized and entirely consistent. As I’ve said before, you clearly enjoy writing; thanks for sharing your talent.

@Yesok1 - I might introduce a Marion-like character if I write a longer version 😊 Em

@Rob_Royale - I was grinning writing 🤭 Em

@JbEdwards - glad you liked it 😊 Em

@Migbird / thank you so much 😊 Em

OMG, I'm dying over here! Just start naked next time; clothes just get caught on shit.

@djrip - I’m thinking of all sorts of adventures for Dr Jones 😊 Emily

I laughed out loud at her solution.

@alohadave - I found it amusing 🤭 Em

Love the creativity! ... Love the way your mind works!

... and, i do think that the 750 word restriction requires us, we writers, to be at our best !

... Take Care, Stay Safe Levi

@Tail_Gunner - thank you. This one was super fun 😊 Emily

You can be such a goof sometimes, Em. That was fun.

@MrPixel - are there times when I’m not a goof? Emily

Awesome story. Love the nods to Raiders...

@JJ82490 - thank you 😊 Emily

Clever and fun.

@8letters - thank you. It was really fun to write 😊 Emily

Yes! A funny little ditty and very enjoyable.

"I had a bad feeling about this"...maybe the guy that played Indy nearly said that in some other movie...? 😀

@Anon - gotta include SW quotes, right? 😊 Emilyb

A fun twist. There have to be easier ways to extract the rd of Ra!

You kept it basic, made it funny and hot. Great way to stay under 750 words. I now honestly wish I had read this before writing my Juliana Jones story. Especially enjoyed the Lara Croft inclusion. Would love to see a sequel where Juliana hooks up with Lara for a joint endeavor- or maybe Nathan Drake or Chloe Frazier. Overall 5 stars here, only weakness was the same of all 750 word stories. It’s too darn short!

I loved Indiana Jones growing up and always wished there was a bad ass female, like Marion, taking the lead. This made me laugh and smile

@Wonderer67 - yea there do 😊 Emily

@AchtungNight - thank you 😊 Emily

@AshleyLee12 - I plan a longer Juliana story 😊 Emily