All Comments on 'Julie's Adventure Pt. 05'

by MidwestDave

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AnnetteBishopAnnetteBishopover 4 years ago
Outstanding depiction - right on the mark

Great chapter, well written and good forethought to execution. Astroglide is excellent. I’d love to meet Julie’s husband. He and Patrick, my husband, would definitely become friends. He could be supportive of your husband and would encourage him to try out his bisexuality. Great job xoxoxoxo Annette ♠️♠️♠️💋💋

sankyzsankyzabout 4 years ago
Awesome

The character buildup is really nice. Hoping that there's another part to this. Subtle details mentioned during the parts were a nice touch.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Midwest Dave must be from Chicago. He and his whore, not unlike our LW whore, seem to favor one ethnic flavor over the others. Nothing quite shows your whore's degradation as completely as this choice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Looking forward to more if there is some coming!

Hiker66BikerHiker66Bikerover 1 year ago

Parts 1-3 of this series were very erotic and a well deserved 5 stars, especially the dinner scene with hubby, but Parts 4 and 5 descended into schoolboy level fantasies. I like some acknowledgement of reality in my erotica, but no-one bothered with condoms or recognised the risk of STDs in the gang bang scene in Part 5? The author should have stuck to the Calvin, Julie, Hubby triangle which, for me, would have been more erotic. But this is not my yarn. Thanks for sharing, 3 stars for this episode. I don’t think that the author should continue this series.

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